http://dagblog.com/reader-blogs/more-haikus-another-friday-afternoon-11372 Comments for "More haikus for another Friday afternoon" en http://dagblog.com/comment/132277#comment-132277 <a id="comment-132277"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/132270#comment-132270">The plural is</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>Nicely done.</p> </div></div></div> Sun, 21 Aug 2011 02:49:28 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 132277 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/132270#comment-132270 <a id="comment-132270"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/132196#comment-132196">Good, but it&#039;s so tricky when</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>The plural is wrong.</p> <p>Consonants crowd the hallway.</p> <p>Wet boots darken rug.</p> <p>---------------------------</p> <p>Brevity lives twice;</p> <p>as a beautiful sentence</p> <p>and a tragic end.</p> </div></div></div> Sat, 20 Aug 2011 23:57:46 +0000 moat comment 132270 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/132267#comment-132267 <a id="comment-132267"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/132262#comment-132262">OK, OK, my last</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>On the other hand,</p> <p>"He had been her muse,</p> <p>But, she's smarter than he, so ...  </p> <p>It was all uphill."</p> <p> </p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sat, 20 Aug 2011 22:33:02 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 132267 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/132266#comment-132266 <a id="comment-132266"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/132252#comment-132252">all creations rise in the</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>Sweet ... and yes, in similar situations I often use diff'rent to comply with the form, so I'll assume you were using the two syllable pronunciation and not making a statement about rebelling against the 17 syllable form (even though I suspect you were. LOL)</p> </div></div></div> Sat, 20 Aug 2011 22:30:19 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 132266 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/132264#comment-132264 <a id="comment-132264"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/132262#comment-132262">OK, OK, my last</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>one more shot across</p> <p>the bow in the gender war.</p> <p>will it never end?</p> </div></div></div> Sat, 20 Aug 2011 21:35:32 +0000 Elusive Trope comment 132264 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/132262#comment-132262 <a id="comment-132262"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/reader-blogs/more-haikus-another-friday-afternoon-11372">More haikus for another Friday afternoon</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even">OK, OK, my last submission: <p> </p><p> </p><p> She had been his muse </p><p> But, being smarter than he, </p><p> It all went downhill </p></div></div></div> Sat, 20 Aug 2011 20:49:42 +0000 CVille Dem comment 132262 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/132255#comment-132255 <a id="comment-132255"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/132251#comment-132251">Excellent ... although the</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>The web is an interesting place...</p> <p>fun facts in Haiku:</p> <p><br /><font color="#000000" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">President Nix</font><font color="#000000" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">on</font></p> <p><font color="#000000" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">covered his cottage cheese with</font></p> <p><font color="#000000" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Tomato Ketchup.</font></p> </div></div></div> Sat, 20 Aug 2011 19:58:09 +0000 Elusive Trope comment 132255 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/132254#comment-132254 <a id="comment-132254"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/132251#comment-132251">Excellent ... although the</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even">Blasphemy! Actually, in Slovenijan and Croatian, the word for tomato is "paradise." I loves me some tomatoes!!!</div></div></div> Sat, 20 Aug 2011 19:56:40 +0000 CVille Dem comment 132254 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/132253#comment-132253 <a id="comment-132253"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/132252#comment-132252">all creations rise in the</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>I have to not that the last line works if one uses the verbal "dif frent" as opposed to the proper "dif fer ent"</p> </div></div></div> Sat, 20 Aug 2011 19:51:34 +0000 Elusive Trope comment 132253 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/132252#comment-132252 <a id="comment-132252"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/reader-blogs/more-haikus-another-friday-afternoon-11372">More haikus for another Friday afternoon</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>all creations rise</p> <p>in the struggle against form.</p> <p>haiku no different.</p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sat, 20 Aug 2011 19:47:46 +0000 Elusive Trope comment 132252 at http://dagblog.com