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Nice, Moat.

MrSmith1 — Thu, 22 Sep 2011 03:31:40 +0000

In reply to Yes, putting some skin in the

Nice, Moat.

Yes, putting some skin in the

moat — Thu, 22 Sep 2011 02:00:27 +0000

In reply to Thanks. That's one of my

Yes, putting some skin in the game.

Without my siblings,

how arbitrary it seems,

being just this one.

Thanks. That's one of my

MrSmith1 — Mon, 19 Sep 2011 02:57:07 +0000

In reply to I like the easy flow of the

Thanks. That's one of my favorites, too. I try to create little scenarios sometimes, establish a mood in 17 syllables. I have an artist friend that creates miniature environments. I'm trying to do something similar with a small amount of words.

Here's one for your roulette imagery:

The roulette wheel spins,

the ball bounces to and fro.

Bet it all on Red.

I like the easy flow of the

moat — Mon, 19 Sep 2011 00:06:03 +0000

In reply to Still even more haikus on yet another Friday afternoon...

I like the easy flow of the one about the book on a desk.

The one about bricks got me thinking of a roulette ball, seeming to hover over different numbers before landing on just one.

Thanks DD. Love the video.

MrSmith1 — Sun, 18 Sep 2011 05:02:57 +0000

In reply to I think you have found an

Thanks DD. Love the video. I will never forget visiting my now 93 year old mother when she was still living independently. This was about 10 years ago. We were in the middle of a conversation and got talking about music, when she casually mentioned how much she loved the Grateful Dead. She had evidently seen a PBS special featuring them and was quite taken with it. All I could think was, Jeez, my mom is a Dead-head! Of course, she also surprised me when I was a teenager by telling me how much she loved Little Richard and Ray Charles, so I guess I should have seen it coming.

Here's to surviving...

I think you have found an

Richard Day — Sat, 17 Sep 2011 23:25:16 +0000

In reply to Still even more haikus on yet another Friday afternoon...

I think you have found an outlet.

I stream and I may get 1700 hits and a lot of comments or I may get 24 hits and no comments. hahahahaha

You have found a niche!

Make sure you find other publishers; other blogs to publish your thoughts.

AND WE WILL SURVIVE!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pmT6udys8Tc