dagblog - Comments for "If it's Friday, it must be time for more haikus"

Thanks, but don't just tease

MrSmith1 — Wed, 19 Oct 2011 18:21:08 +0000

In reply to I used this blog to teach my

Thanks, but don't just tease us, come on, post a few of them. :-)

I used this blog to teach my

tmccarthy0 — Wed, 19 Oct 2011 17:23:08 +0000

In reply to If it's Friday, it must be time for more haikus

I used this blog to teach my friends daughter about Haiku style. Her teacher didn't see fit to explain the 5 7 5 requirement with examples, nor did she bother to have the class write a Haiku or two together. Kids learn by example. So she and I sat there and we wrote a Haiku or two together! Now she can do them all herself.

Thanks for this.

Masticating teenager. LOL I

MrSmith1 — Sun, 16 Oct 2011 05:13:02 +0000

In reply to A good batch. Your rhythm has

Masticating teenager. LOL

I love this one, moat!

Here's a silly alliterative one I just did:

Docile delinquents,

doing downers daily, don't

despair dumb details.

Interesting observation about my rhythms. I guess they change with my moods.

A good batch. Your rhythm has

moat — Sun, 16 Oct 2011 01:03:40 +0000

In reply to If it's Friday, it must be time for more haikus

A good batch. Your rhythm has been changing over time

Punch card bubble gum,

Masticating teenager,

What is he saying?

HA!! Glad to know I'm not

MrSmith1 — Sat, 15 Oct 2011 01:30:12 +0000

In reply to H A I K U Five letters, two

HA!! Glad to know I'm not the only one that suffers with lockups, screen freezes and corrupted files.

Damn this computer!

'Page Unresponsive' ... Thanks Chrome.

(Browser arouser.)

Browser arouser
of anger in the user.
Click on link for "Help.

H A I K U Five letters, two

Verified Atheist — Fri, 14 Oct 2011 23:03:29 +0000

In reply to If it's Friday, it must be time for more haikus

H A I K U

Five letters, two syllables

Self referential

Recursions repeat

Infinite and infinite

Go back to line 1

Ctrl-S, lock up

Fucking file is corrupted

Thank God for DropBox