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Wonderful, Anonymous!

MrSmith1 — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 09:43:12 +0000

In reply to Because of my dreams each one

Wonderful, Anonymous!

Because of my dreams each one

Anonymous — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 05:58:35 +0000

In reply to Nice moat. One touch, I'm

Because of my dreams

each one held your image true

we now live that dream

Wonderful! The darkest

MrSmith1 — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 05:22:34 +0000

In reply to I cannot recall the darkest

Wonderful!

The darkest corner
of my being still can not
forget your true love.

I cannot recall the darkest

moat — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 03:57:00 +0000

In reply to Nice moat. One touch, I'm

I cannot recall

the darkest corners of time

without you and me.

Samuel Clemens on his porch,

MrSmith1 — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 07:17:02 +0000

In reply to Great as always. When I am

Samuel Clemens

on his porch, smokin' cigars

"Huck Finn, off my lawn!"

Climbing up the tree

than bragging to your brother,

'I'm higher than you!'

Is it so bad the

future's just beyond our grasp?

We'd screw it up too.

Perhaps I should re-write the earlier one thusly:

Alas we perceive
a linear existence,
the Past IS prologue.

Great as always. When I am

Richard Day — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 03:37:15 +0000

In reply to haikus for another Friday afternoon ... in which we dream of sanity and deal with illusions

Great as always.

When I am experiencing my more psychotic thoughts, I truly wonder if our universe is linear in nature.

I sense Sam Clemens on the porch sucking on a cigar and experiencing his neighborhood.

I can almost see my little brother David climbing a tree at our lakeshore encampment in the olden days.

It is only the future that seems beyond my grasp.

Nice moat. One touch, I'm

MrSmith1 — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 03:16:03 +0000

In reply to All is in each touch. But I

Nice moat.

One touch, I'm 'all in',

but how quickly time passes.

Let me try again.

I am touched at once

so I quickly try again,

but I forget why.

All is in each touch. But I

moat — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 02:55:42 +0000

In reply to haikus for another Friday afternoon ... in which we dream of sanity and deal with illusions

All is in each touch.

But I forget so quickly.

Let me try again.