dagblog - Comments for "Still even more haikus for a Friday afternoon and January is almost half over"

Thanks, but I think I need

MrSmith1 — Mon, 16 Jan 2012 19:30:40 +0000

In reply to I like that a lot.

Thanks, but I think I need to do a re-write on the last two lines... How's this?

Those life preservers
and flight jackets brag too much.
But you know that, right?

No jacket will make you fly,
no vest prevent your decay.

I like that a lot.

Oxy Mora — Mon, 16 Jan 2012 15:19:21 +0000

In reply to tanka haiku: Those life

I like that a lot.

tanka haiku: Those life

MrSmith1 — Mon, 16 Jan 2012 14:19:08 +0000

In reply to Smile, you ga-i-jin; What are

tanka haiku: Those life preservers

and flight jackets brag too much.

But you know that, right?

Neither one will give you flight
nor preserve dying folk's lives.

Smile, you ga-i-jin; What are

Oxy Mora — Mon, 16 Jan 2012 03:08:58 +0000

In reply to Sweet.

Smile, you ga-i-jin;

What are they doing up here?

Nice flight jackets, though.

Sweet.

MrSmith1 — Sun, 15 Jan 2012 19:31:08 +0000

In reply to Two days of climbing Slept in

Sweet.

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Scaling Mount Fuji,

I suddenly found myself

posing for photos.

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Wonderful! Barbie's skate

MrSmith1 — Sun, 15 Jan 2012 19:28:04 +0000

In reply to Some various replies: -- When

Wonderful!

Barbie's skate party,

ended in chaos, when Ken

missed a toe-loop.

LOL! Love that one! Double

MrSmith1 — Sun, 15 Jan 2012 19:24:52 +0000

In reply to Arrogant Yankees I ain't no

LOL! Love that one!

Double haiku: About them hillbillies ...

how many does it take to

screw in a light-bulb?

The answer of course,

is none; their cabin ain't got

no 'lectricity...

I especially like that last

Verified Atheist — Sun, 15 Jan 2012 18:40:09 +0000

In reply to Some various replies: -- When

I especially like that last one.

Two days of climbing Slept in

Oxy Mora — Sun, 15 Jan 2012 18:39:55 +0000

In reply to Still even more haikus for a Friday afternoon and January is almost half over

Two days of climbing

Slept in a hut with Japanese

We scaled Mount Fuji.

Arrogant Yankees I ain't no

Verified Atheist — Sun, 15 Jan 2012 18:39:20 +0000

In reply to The price Yankees pay, for

Arrogant Yankees

I ain't no damn hillbilly!

Them be fighting words!

All in jest, of course!