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moat — Sun, 12 Feb 2012 23:02:32 +0000

In reply to I ran out of stone. The eye

*blushes*

I hereby render unto Moat the

Richard Day — Sun, 12 Feb 2012 22:31:00 +0000

In reply to I ran out of stone. The eye

I hereby render unto Moat the Dayly Line of the Day Award for this here Dagblog Site, given to all of him from all of me. ha

This is wonderful, moat!

MrSmith1 — Sun, 12 Feb 2012 22:20:22 +0000

In reply to I ran out of stone. The eye

This is wonderful, moat!

That is so damned good!

Oxy Mora — Sun, 12 Feb 2012 19:45:32 +0000

In reply to I ran out of stone. The eye

That is so damned good! Brilliant, man.

I ran out of stone. The eye

moat — Sun, 12 Feb 2012 19:31:51 +0000

In reply to Another Friday afternoon at the Haiku-lodeon ...

I ran out of stone.

The eye is drawn to the gap

where the path falls short.

I thought that might be the

Oxy Mora — Sun, 12 Feb 2012 16:16:40 +0000

In reply to I actually noticed that

I thought that might be the case. Thanks.

I actually noticed that

MrSmith1 — Sun, 12 Feb 2012 00:36:28 +0000

In reply to You can do it, and like we

I actually noticed that earlier, but thought I was having trouble with my browser. LOL

Personally, I think the bold type face is a bit jarring. Would just italicizing the first and last stanzas be enough?

You can do it, and like we

Oxy Mora — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 23:51:14 +0000

In reply to Thanks, Oxy. Your poem has

You can do it, and like we say, if not now, when? BTW, I reformatted it bolding the middle and italicizing the first and last stanzas to appear more readable as meta reflections. Would you give me your thoughts on the changed format---the other was straight stanzas. Thanks.

Thanks, Oxy. Your poem has

MrSmith1 — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 23:17:52 +0000

In reply to Always like a meditation to

Thanks, Oxy. Your poem has inspired me to go back and try some longer form poetry again I'll see if I can still do that .

Always like a meditation to

Oxy Mora — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 22:48:17 +0000

In reply to Another Friday afternoon at the Haiku-lodeon ...

Always like a meditation to read these. I Love "Life's twists and turns". An essential truth so exquisitely expressed.