dagblog - Comments for "Another Friday afternoon in May at the haiku-lodeon"

Perhaps I should add a

MrSmith1 — Sun, 13 May 2012 15:49:54 +0000

Perhaps I should add

a disclaimer to my work;

'Caution; may cause tears.'

(Thank you for the kind words, tmc.)

tmccarthy0 — Sun, 13 May 2012 13:52:45 +0000

Your Haiku's made me weep Mr. Smith.

MrSmith1 — Sun, 13 May 2012 09:48:07 +0000

double haiku: He sees kids at play
and represses sadness at
not having children.

Sitting in the park,
he looks at ducks and swallows
wishing he could fly.

Richard Day — Sun, 13 May 2012 04:50:53 +0000

God you reminded me.

There is this nursery school about four blocks from here.

I just stand there sometimes watching the tots at play. I mean if you really think about what freedom means; this has got to be it.

There are always two or three women there to make sure the tots do no harm to themselves or others.

Then I realize I must move on.

I mean I must look like some old fricking pervert. hahahahahahaha

I mean I can stare at the ducks and pigeons and swallows all day and no one would accuse me of being untoward.

hahahahaah