http://dagblog.com/arts/sweltering-friday-afternoon-haiku-lodeon-06-29-12-14128 Comments for "A Sweltering Friday afternoon at the haiku-lodeon - 06-29-12" en http://dagblog.com/comment/158435#comment-158435 <a id="comment-158435"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/158434#comment-158434">The intent to see with eyes</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>LOL! </p> <p> </p> <p>Her plea to sue o'er</p> <p>eyes full of collagen, made</p> <p>her lawyer numb-er.</p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sat, 30 Jun 2012 18:40:22 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 158435 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/158434#comment-158434 <a id="comment-158434"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/158433#comment-158433">The intent to see with eyes</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p><span style="font-size: 14px">The intent to see</span></p> <p><span style="font-size: 14px">with eyes full of collagen,</span></p> <p><span style="font-size: 14px">her lawyer's number. </span></p> </div></div></div> Sat, 30 Jun 2012 18:34:14 +0000 Oxy Mora comment 158434 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/158433#comment-158433 <a id="comment-158433"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/158432#comment-158432">The intensity, her lips full</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p> </p> <p>The intent to see</p> <p>with eyes full of collagen ...</p> <p>objects are blurry.<br /><br />  </p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sat, 30 Jun 2012 18:24:03 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 158433 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/158432#comment-158432 <a id="comment-158432"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/158421#comment-158421">LOL! I love your</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p><span style="font-size: 13px">The intensity,</span></p> <p><span style="font-size: 13px">her lips full of collagen,</span></p> <p><span style="font-size: 13px">objections be damned.</span></p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sat, 30 Jun 2012 18:14:57 +0000 Oxy Mora comment 158432 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/158421#comment-158421 <a id="comment-158421"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/158417#comment-158417">Who have you steadied? That</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p> </p> <p>LOL!  I love your ridiculous!<br />  </p> <p> </p> <p>The intensity</p> <p>of her lips made collagen</p> <p>injections moot points.</p> </div></div></div> Sat, 30 Jun 2012 15:44:58 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 158421 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/158417#comment-158417 <a id="comment-158417"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/arts/sweltering-friday-afternoon-haiku-lodeon-06-29-12-14128">A Sweltering Friday afternoon at the haiku-lodeon - 06-29-12</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p><em><span style="font-size: 13px">Who have you steadied?  </span></em><span style="font-size: 13px">That one is spectacular. </span></p> <p><span style="font-size: 13px">From the sublime to the ridiculous:</span></p> <p><span style="font-size: 13px">The intensity</span></p> <p><span style="font-size: 13px">of her lips made him wary.</span></p> <p><span style="font-size: 13px">He touched his wallet.</span></p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sat, 30 Jun 2012 14:25:49 +0000 Oxy Mora comment 158417 at http://dagblog.com