dagblog - Comments for "Friday afternoon Runs Away with the Haikulodeon"

You got it technically

MrSmith1 — Tue, 04 Sep 2012 03:20:50 +0000

You got it technically perfect ... and I agree with Ramona, it's beautiful. Write more.

moat — Tue, 04 Sep 2012 01:06:10 +0000

Thank you.

Ramona — Tue, 04 Sep 2012 00:09:57 +0000

Wow. I don't know what you call it technically, but I call it beautiful.

moat — Mon, 03 Sep 2012 22:07:59 +0000

I have never tried a tanka haiku before but here goes:

I am a planet.

Water fills the low places.

Wind carves the mountains.

So the Earth is my sister;

Not an identical twin.

MrSmith1 — Sun, 02 Sep 2012 15:52:46 +0000

Beautiful, flowerchild.

On a Sunday morn,
it's always nice to see that
you've left a comment.

wabby — Sun, 02 Sep 2012 10:39:40 +0000

A bee that lands on
a giant sunflower, will
seldom seek a rose.

(photo from an old garden of mine)