dagblog - Comments for "A Friday Afternoon's Ride on the Haikulodeon"

Maples, elms and oaks burst

MrSmith1 — Wed, 10 Oct 2012 16:58:54 +0000

In reply to Cluster of Aspens encircled

Maples, elms and oaks
burst with yellow, red and orange;
the forest ablaze!

Cluster of Aspens encircled

moat — Tue, 09 Oct 2012 02:38:50 +0000

In reply to As the earth prepares to

Cluster of Aspens

encircled by conifers;

Yellow defies Green.

Many years later A forest

wabby — Sun, 07 Oct 2012 15:57:01 +0000

In reply to The squirrels dig

Many years later

A forest grows in Brooklyn

Squirrels always win.

Sorry for the delay in

MrSmith1 — Sun, 07 Oct 2012 12:18:46 +0000

In reply to A Friday Afternoon's Ride on the Haikulodeon

Sorry for the delay in responding, I'm actually taking a week's vacation and have limited internet access. Wonderful haikus, all of them. Flowerchild, DD, Moat, it's wonderful to get to read your haiku responses. They inspire me. Autumn is a good inspiration too, isn't it?

Skies with quiet clouds,

The boardwalk sparsely peopled,

Old folks lost in thought.

The squirrels dig

moat — Sat, 06 Oct 2012 23:33:39 +0000

In reply to A Friday Afternoon's Ride on the Haikulodeon

The squirrels dig holes;

seemingly by a fixed plan

where my tiny lawn

becomes an array of pits

First blizzard arrived And it

Richard Day — Sat, 06 Oct 2012 18:58:16 +0000

In reply to A Friday Afternoon's Ride on the Haikulodeon

First blizzard arrived

And it left the ground just damp

Was sound and flurry

Leaves are goin fast

The sun is just peekin through

I better go now

As the earth prepares to

wabby — Sat, 06 Oct 2012 18:28:02 +0000

In reply to A Friday Afternoon's Ride on the Haikulodeon

As the earth prepares
to take its winter snooze, the
foliage blushes.

Shy maple blushed red
Until the cold gale blustered
And modesty lost.