dagblog - Comments for "A New Year Begins at the Haikulodeon "

moat goes tanka ... nice.

MrSmith1 — Mon, 07 Jan 2013 03:36:32 +0000

In reply to Knocked down or knocked

moat goes tanka ... nice.

Comparing this, that

and the other, demands that

we be judgmental.

Knocked down or knocked

moat — Sun, 06 Jan 2013 23:24:07 +0000

In reply to A New Year Begins at the Haikulodeon

Knocked down or knocked up,

English compares this with that:

A bird in both hands.

The song reveals the singer:

Sad but true, honest, and mad.

Yeah. We're known far and

Anonymous — Sat, 05 Jan 2013 14:34:27 +0000

In reply to Oh, man, I just saw this

Yeah. We're known far and wide as the magic 8 ball of political commentary sites.

Hey! Who are you calling a

MrSmith1 — Sat, 05 Jan 2013 14:29:39 +0000

In reply to Oh, man, I just saw this

Hey! Who are you calling a homo genius? I ain't neither!

(Not that there's anything wrong with that.)

Sarcastic-ku:

Dagblog is a mush ...
of writers who all speak as
One.... Oh yeah, that's right.

Oh, man, I just saw this

Orion — Sat, 05 Jan 2013 13:42:10 +0000

In reply to Someone asked Orion how he

Oh, man, I just saw this comment pop up and it's a weird one. LOL.

I did not know that Dag is actually one homogeneous entity that answers questions. It's good to know it is.

Oops, sorry--it was meant to

Anonymous — Sat, 05 Jan 2013 06:53:35 +0000

In reply to One syllable shy in the last

Oops, sorry--it was meant to be "So dag said."

I panicked on the delivery.

One syllable shy in the last

MrSmith1 — Sat, 05 Jan 2013 05:11:02 +0000

In reply to Someone asked Orion how he

One syllable shy in the last line. Try "Dag said, "it's all yours."

Other than that, really excellent, Erica!

P.S. Thanks for reading my stuff. Sometimes I think it's just DD and me having a private conversation. hahaha

P.P.S.

Poet Laureate
by default? ... It could be verse.
It might have to rhyme.

Nice, DD. Thanks for being

MrSmith1 — Sat, 05 Jan 2013 04:58:52 +0000

In reply to I am in the depths The depths

Nice, DD. Thanks for being in such a similar mindset.

"Ahhh the source of real despair must be disrepair." Ain't it the truth?

Rooting through garbage;
not the same as feeling you
are down in the dumps.

Someone asked Orion how he

erica20 — Sat, 05 Jan 2013 04:25:08 +0000

In reply to A New Year Begins at the Haikulodeon

Someone asked Orion how he became the Dag expert on SSRIs (or some question close to that) and I thought of this one:

The job was open

Orion showed interest

Dag said "It's yours."

I am in the depths The depths

Richard Day — Sat, 05 Jan 2013 03:35:26 +0000

In reply to A New Year Begins at the Haikulodeon

I am in the depths

The depths of what I don't know

And I just got paid!

God knows what real depths

I would find; without the pay

Looking for the source!

Looking for the source?

Aaaah, the source of real despair

Must be disrepair

If down in the dumps

The beginning of the year

What more might I fear?

So I write my blogs

And I feign to really count

When I really don't

Chin up they would say

Things could always be much worse

I could be lost-ed

forever and a day

I shall awake tomorrow

And be less afraid

And why tomorrow

After all, after all I

Have really been paid!

The end

(why do I do this?)