dagblog - Comments for "A Chilly Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Now that one, I LOVE!

MrSmith1 — Fri, 25 Jan 2013 18:39:35 +0000

In reply to It was too abstruse. Some

Now that one, I LOVE!

It was too abstruse. Some

moat — Fri, 25 Jan 2013 17:41:31 +0000

In reply to moat, you lost me with this

It was too abstruse.

Some thoughts, like dogs kept out back,

wriggle through the gaps.

moat, you lost me with this

MrSmith1 — Fri, 25 Jan 2013 05:03:17 +0000

In reply to This bit; each on

moat, you lost me with this one ... Sorry.

I'm probably just tired, not being purposely dense.

Here's my lame attempt at a response. I'll try to do a better one tomorrow:

tanka haiku:

Let's shmooze; haikus
refuse rhyme? They'll chime on time,
like a temple bell.

That fell to hell, and will fry
the butterfly that lands well.

This bit; each on

moat — Fri, 25 Jan 2013 03:49:44 +0000

In reply to A Chilly Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

This bit; each on each;

Corralling factors to rhyme;

Against what is here.

I am glad to hear your

erica20 — Sat, 19 Jan 2013 03:23:40 +0000

In reply to I do not know why but you

I am glad to hear your virtual laughter!

Sadly, the chat turned out not to include opportunities for haiku.

I must say the Dag approach allows so much more human interaction.

When I have some $$$ I will try to help out too.

I do not know why but you

Richard Day — Fri, 18 Jan 2013 22:45:30 +0000

In reply to Mr. Smith, I love If you own

I do not know why but you have me laughing!

Mr. Smith is one of those fellows would ever veto such a request.

hahahaha

Either would I.

As you see, Mr. Smith agreed.

I have no idea why this got to me!

Absolutely. Thanks, Erica.

MrSmith1 — Fri, 18 Jan 2013 21:11:05 +0000

In reply to Mr. Smith, I love If you own

Absolutely. Thanks, Erica. ;-)

Splendid, DD! Can there be

MrSmith1 — Fri, 18 Jan 2013 21:10:27 +0000

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Splendid, DD!

Can there be fairness

in a world where there is

so much random chance?

There are so many

possibilities, perhaps

it's all a crap shoot.

Mr. Smith, I love If you own

erica20 — Fri, 18 Jan 2013 20:58:49 +0000

In reply to A Chilly Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Mr. Smith,

I love

If you own a gun

You've agreed to a world where

Shooting's an option.

May I use it over on TPM Prime for the discussion?

You are an interesting guy;

Richard Day — Fri, 18 Jan 2013 20:35:35 +0000

In reply to A Chilly Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

You are an interesting guy; no doubt about it.

Lost loves. I gave up on lost loves except for the children the love bore! ha

I do not know if this fits in. I wrote it in anticipation? You have me hooked on this damn Asian model. I never 'got' iambic pentameter. hahahah:

I wish I may, I

Wish I might, at least tonight

Not be so uptight

There are many fish

Who survive comfortably

In many waters

Be it brine or fresh

The water sustains them all

Survivalists all!

Some fish just survive

These strange creatures found a way

To live and to thrive

Where is the fairness

In all of this reality?

The flu shall kill some

HIV shall kill others

Some die, others live

Why I am not dead?

And others more superior

Just lie in their graves?

I wonder wonder

Who wrote the book of the dead?

There is no logic