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Wonderful, moat! Oh, to

MrSmith1 — Sat, 02 Feb 2013 04:20:40 +0000

In reply to Thinking of lost love, My

Wonderful, moat!

Oh, to be much loved

and never unrequited;

fooled, never foolish.

Thou has advantage of me,

For I have played all the parts.

Thinking of lost love, My

moat — Sat, 02 Feb 2013 03:19:19 +0000

In reply to Another Perfectly Fine Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Thinking of lost love,

My mind has only found this:

What I have turned down.

I mostly witness desire,

Even when it is my own.

So ... how cold was it? It

MrSmith1 — Fri, 01 Feb 2013 21:17:26 +0000

In reply to Thinking of those young girls

So ... how cold was it?

It was so cold, the hot soup

was sold on a stick.

It was so cold that

when I spilled my coffee, it

didn't splash, it broke.

It was so cold that

the polar bears were wearing

eskimos as scarves.

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Reeling nether parts

Are something to eschew, no

matter what the month.

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Thanks DD for always being willing to be the first to comment. It's always a pleasure to read your comments.

Thinking of those young girls

Richard Day — Fri, 01 Feb 2013 20:51:18 +0000

In reply to Another Perfectly Fine Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Thinking of those young girls again?

I still cannot get away from the cold:

T. S. Eliot

Is wrong, April just is not

The cruelest month

My body screaming

My nether parts are reeling

January sucks

I am really sure

January is cruelest

In intensity

But how can a bloke

Appreciate April's glow

Without winter's blow!

And today it was 20 below!