dagblog - Comments for "A Sweet, Summer Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Thanks, it's one of my faves

MrSmith1 — Sun, 28 Jul 2013 22:39:17 +0000

Thanks, it's one of my faves too.

Whimsical haikus

that spring up inside my head

always make me laugh.

Verified Atheist — Sun, 28 Jul 2013 20:29:49 +0000

I think my favorite is this one:

In an oblong tin,
he kept his oolong tea, but
he'd tinned tea too long.

There's a certain whimsy about it that appeals to me on a lazy Sunday afternoon.

Whimsical haiku
Keeps my spirit high today
Muchas gracias

MrSmith1 — Sun, 28 Jul 2013 13:24:01 +0000

Three opinions

whether or not 'opinions'

is three syllables.

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Be here now always

reminds me of 'est' training.

Now, be there was then.

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Thanks, moat. You always inspire me.

moat — Sun, 28 Jul 2013 03:24:07 +0000

I could be here now.

The door is open and shut.

Three opinions.

The double dunk idea needs a haiku response. Haven't found it yet.