dagblog - Comments for "A Jazz Tinged Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Nice, moat. Driftwood in

MrSmith1 — Mon, 02 Sep 2013 15:47:01 +0000

Nice, moat.

Driftwood in the sand,

long removed from livelihood

this soul-less tree branch.

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Coming down the steps,

she held onto the handrail

with a fierce-some grip.

moat — Mon, 02 Sep 2013 12:49:43 +0000

Coming down the steps,

his wave broke against her frown.

Driftwood on the sand.

MrSmith1 — Sat, 31 Aug 2013 20:20:25 +0000

Good ones, moat!

Continuous change

for the ninety nine percent:

we're nickeled and dimed.

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It's not the way I

don't do things that matters, it's

the way I forget

moat — Sat, 31 Aug 2013 18:21:11 +0000

continuous change,

internal origami,

folds without creases.

The car is somewhere.

Does it remember it's place

the way I forget?