dagblog - Comments for "An Autumn Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Excellent, moat! One

MrSmith1 — Fri, 27 Sep 2013 11:43:25 +0000

In reply to One mortal body, This one

Excellent, moat!

One mortal body

and one immortal soul merge;

Grab your pants, let's go!

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Leaves cover the tracks,

locomotives used to chug

through this little town.

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Snow slips off of limbs,

as the temper'ture rises.

Beauty turns to slush.

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One mortal body, This one

moat — Fri, 27 Sep 2013 01:55:43 +0000

In reply to An Autumn Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

One mortal body,

This one here and no other:

My ride till its done.

Leaves cover the tracks.

The forest looks all the same.

Snow slips off of limbs.

Thanks for the set-up. ;-)

MrSmith1 — Mon, 23 Sep 2013 21:02:52 +0000

In reply to A classic, Smith.

Thanks for the set-up. ;-)

A classic, Smith.

Oxy Mora — Mon, 23 Sep 2013 20:49:06 +0000

In reply to What did JFK tell Bobby

A classic, Smith.

What did JFK tell Bobby

MrSmith1 — Mon, 23 Sep 2013 20:36:57 +0000

In reply to I don't like downers except

What did JFK
tell Bobby about the Blonde?
"The dumb thing's depressed."

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I don't like downers except

Oxy Mora — Mon, 23 Sep 2013 17:29:13 +0000

In reply to Excellent, Erica! --- Down

I don't like downers

except in a pillow, crap,

the dumb thing's depressed.

All the world's problems Are

MrSmith1 — Mon, 23 Sep 2013 17:18:06 +0000

In reply to Ha ha! Whenever I think I've

All the world's problems

Are completely forgotten

whenever I think.

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Ha ha! Whenever I think I've

erica20 — Mon, 23 Sep 2013 16:47:20 +0000

In reply to Excellent, Erica! --- Down

Ha ha!

Whenever I think

I've got the piano down,

That Smith tunes it up!

Excellent, Erica! --- Down

MrSmith1 — Mon, 23 Sep 2013 16:04:21 +0000

In reply to Here's one I thought of this

Excellent, Erica!

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Down comes in a rush

of feathers, soft and fine, to

comfort her better.

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One of Life's perks is,

no matter how you slice it,

Coffee must be ground.

Here's one I thought of this

erica20 — Mon, 23 Sep 2013 15:29:31 +0000

In reply to An Autumn Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Here's one I thought of this weekend watching acorns.

Down comes in a rush;
While up, it must be said, is
Something of a grind.