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I am late but I don't care! I

Richard Day — Tue, 01 Oct 2013 05:59:35 +0000

In reply to Diphthongs; thongs that

I am late but I don't care!

I mean what are the possible punatives; as they say. hahhahaha

I love Lena but, damn I hate this song. haahahha

See, I mean this is where I'm at;

I get losted sometimes. haahahah

Most swallow whole

MrSmith1 — Tue, 01 Oct 2013 03:54:55 +0000

In reply to Don't mess with dip't

Most swallow whole the
political pablums, but
Texans eschew them.

Thank you. I am glad to see

moat — Tue, 01 Oct 2013 01:40:37 +0000

In reply to Moat, some very good haikus.

Thank you.

I am glad to see you jump into the Texan thing with your own. I particularly like the use of "es chew." The twang gets a real meal out of the consonants.

Diphthongs; thongs that

MrSmith1 — Mon, 30 Sep 2013 20:39:11 +0000

In reply to Don't mess with dip't

Diphthongs; thongs that you

thing while dipping to muthic.

'Thomebody Lubs Me.'

Moat, some very good haikus.

Oxy Mora — Mon, 30 Sep 2013 17:47:13 +0000

In reply to Texans like big hats. They

Moat, some very good haikus. Love the "fear" ones.

Don't mess with dip't

Oxy Mora — Mon, 30 Sep 2013 17:40:05 +0000

In reply to "A Texas diphthong - Does

Don't mess with dip't thongs

Sip'd, Rip'd, or barbecued ones

Texans es chew them.

Simply wonderful, DD!

MrSmith1 — Sun, 29 Sep 2013 13:52:12 +0000

In reply to Everybody's Talkin about

Simply wonderful, DD!

"A Texas diphthong - Does

MrSmith1 — Sun, 29 Sep 2013 13:49:28 +0000

In reply to Okay, I am just looking for

"A Texas diphthong - Does that refer to what young girlies wear when they go swimmin in Texas?"

Yes, and when they swim naked, it's referred to as a skinny-diphthong.

Okay, I am just looking for

Richard Day — Sun, 29 Sep 2013 07:02:58 +0000

In reply to He buried his fear in the

Okay, I am just looking for definitions here and haikus do not offer definitions.

A Texas diphthong...

Does that refer to what young girlies wear when they go swimmin in Texas?

Everybody's Talkin about

Richard Day — Sun, 29 Sep 2013 06:59:27 +0000

In reply to Fall Foliage Peaks on a Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Everybody's

Talkin about Walter White

And fumigation

Everybody's

Talkin about the shut down

Of the government

Everybody's

Talkin about the end times

The impending doom?

Did you ever wish

To hold a stranger real close

And make her feel loved?

Talking is a waste

I am sixty-three years old

And the end is nigh

Ten years or fifteen

That is all I got right now

So the end is nigh

Or maybe I have

Just two years or even less

I am terminal

Because I am a mortal

Mortality rules

Where is the coffee

And another piece of pie

Forget the pundits

Everybody's

Talkin at me; I can't hear

Words they are sayin

Have fears of dyin?

It is inevitable

So grasp the stranger

Governments shut down

TV shows have finales

We are gonna die!

And what is the point?

See, I forget all my points

And the end is nigh

the end