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Nicely done, DD. Thanks.

MrSmith1 — Sun, 24 Nov 2013 21:35:53 +0000

In reply to As good as it gets Ends with

Nicely done, DD. Thanks. Have a Happy Thanksgiving.

The end's all you've got?

That means you're either done, or

facing the wrong way,

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a young man once took

an angel down the block and

let her spread her ... wings.

As good as it gets Ends with

Richard Day — Sun, 24 Nov 2013 20:39:59 +0000

In reply to Filibuster-Free Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

As good as it gets

Ends with bakery odors

And a sense of loss

This mental reject

Takes this angel down the block

This Nicholson is nuts

I hunt for Helens

But so did Paris et al

It all ends in war

My hunt ended well

I found a daughter and son

So all ended well

But what has this all

To do with some bakery?

Well it's all I got

That's a lovely one, moat.

MrSmith1 — Sun, 24 Nov 2013 03:42:32 +0000

In reply to I particularly like the "when

That's a lovely one, moat. Happy Thanksgiving.

The moon changes shape,

'cuz the earth goes 'round the sun ...

I just eat too much.

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When I am empty
I need to fill me up. I
abhor vacuums too..

Thanks trkingmomoe. Happy

MrSmith1 — Sun, 24 Nov 2013 03:33:07 +0000

In reply to Always a joy to read. You

Thanks trkingmomoe. Happy Thanksgiving.

I particularly like the "when

moat — Sun, 24 Nov 2013 00:11:14 +0000

In reply to Filibuster-Free Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

I particularly like the "when you call your love" one. I guess I am a kid.

When I am empty,

I see when others are full.

The moon changes shape.

Always a joy to read. You

trkingmomoe — Sat, 23 Nov 2013 08:42:15 +0000

In reply to Filibuster-Free Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Always a joy to read. You have a nice Thanksgiving.