dagblog - Comments for "A Grey, (Yet Hopeful), Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Wonderful, moat! History is

MrSmith1 — Mon, 13 Jan 2014 03:58:24 +0000

In reply to Money is a game. The exchange

Wonderful, moat!

History is tough,

Math nearly impossible.

Give me Study Hall.

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Money's a game of

brazen manipulation ...

We are merely pawns.

Money is a game. The exchange

moat — Mon, 13 Jan 2014 02:45:59 +0000

In reply to Nice one, moat!! Where

Money is a game.

The exchange makes us equal.

We can both lose all.

The card on the floor,

Three doors closed on Sunday night:

Dreams march toward morning.

History is tough.

Stories within all stories.

But one is not there.

Nice one, moat!! Where

MrSmith1 — Sat, 11 Jan 2014 06:29:54 +0000

In reply to My favorite is the one about

Nice one, moat!!

Where dusty dogies

tie the ankles of the clowns ...

Cruel rodeo.

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That damned six of clubs.

How often has it crushed my

plans for a straight flush.

My favorite is the one about

moat — Sat, 11 Jan 2014 04:45:39 +0000

In reply to A Grey, (Yet Hopeful), Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

My favorite is the one about the six of clubs.

Love ties together

what one life can not endure:

Cruel rodeo.

+25F today. I went out two

Richard Day — Sat, 11 Jan 2014 00:13:25 +0000

In reply to A Grey, (Yet Hopeful), Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

+25F today.

I went out two times

I mean the footing is bad

I went out two times.

hahahahah

When one is shut in

Relations with others, fail

When one is shut in

I have to admit

It is getting much better

Better all the time

I opened a window

Frost is just off the windows

Windows are real nice

the end

I laughed at the Christie-ku,

Ramona — Fri, 10 Jan 2014 23:46:10 +0000

In reply to A Grey, (Yet Hopeful), Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

I laughed at the Christie-ku, too. Well done! As always.

Love that pic of the Brooklyn Bridge.

And this--this is deep:

You don't always know
when you have stepped from a field
into a meadow.

I've always wondered about that, though when it comes to writing I like the way "meadow" looks. Much better than "field".

I got a chuckle out of the

trkingmomoe — Fri, 10 Jan 2014 22:04:33 +0000

In reply to A Grey, (Yet Hopeful), Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

I got a chuckle out of the Christi-ku. Thanks for the read. I look for this each week.

I hope you are staying warm and getting better.