dagblog - Comments for "Another Pre-Super Bowl Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

In most arguments, somebody

MrSmith1 — Thu, 06 Feb 2014 06:01:04 +0000

In reply to Riding the Local, I saw her

In most arguments,

somebody will get pissed off ...

and someone, pissed on.

Riding the Local, I saw her

moat — Thu, 06 Feb 2014 03:04:52 +0000

In reply to No enlightenment is reached

Riding the Local,

I saw her on the Express;

Parallel process.

When the questions start,

Everybody gets pissed off.

It is personal.

No enlightenment is reached

MrSmith1 — Mon, 03 Feb 2014 01:49:19 +0000

In reply to Through the train windows, I

No enlightenment

is reached without questions asked.

Teach and you shall learn.

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Through the train's windows,
I see, on the platform bench,
my g*d-d*mned briefcase.

Through the train windows, I

moat — Sun, 02 Feb 2014 23:46:41 +0000

In reply to moat, you are an excellent

Through the train windows,

I see her on the platform.

Watch the closing doors.

Practice teaches us,

Plus we learn from each other.

The pleasure is mine.

moat, you are an excellent

MrSmith1 — Sun, 02 Feb 2014 04:27:03 +0000

In reply to Dreams are a city, Rooms

moat, you are an excellent teacher. Thank you.

A city of dreams

adventure hides underground

the space between trains.

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Dreams are a city, Rooms

moat — Sun, 02 Feb 2014 03:44:53 +0000

In reply to Another Pre-Super Bowl Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Dreams are a city,

Rooms become trains and kisses.

The space between trees.

Thank you for your haiku. I

trkingmomoe — Sun, 02 Feb 2014 02:43:22 +0000

In reply to Another Pre-Super Bowl Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Thank you for your haiku. I liked the one about the 2 homeless discussing the state of the Union.

Oh delightful! You know

Richard Day — Sat, 01 Feb 2014 00:30:02 +0000

In reply to Another Pre-Super Bowl Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Oh delightful!

You know pigeons stick around here all winter.

Dumber than most ducks and geese. hahahaha

They fly into windows and die.

hahaha

I will be back.

I like this!