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Nice, moat. What often

MrSmith1 — Mon, 24 Mar 2014 00:34:08 +0000

In reply to Dancing skeletons; Words

Nice, moat.

What often follows

The gavel of regret is

an unfair sentence.

A sly, tiny nod

to a higher justice might

ameliorate.

Dancing skeletons; Words

moat — Sun, 23 Mar 2014 23:11:14 +0000

In reply to A Warmly Spring-like Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Dancing skeletons;

Words skittering in the pan

with sly tiny nods

argue against the old judge

and his gavel of regret.

Hmmm ... Isn't that, in

MrSmith1 — Sun, 23 Mar 2014 22:38:07 +0000

In reply to I know how you feel. Only I

Hmmm ... Isn't that, in essence, the plan our mothers had for us when were kids ... wear us out during the day so that we'd sleep at night?

Or, in haiku form:

This, in essence, was

the plan our moms had for us;

wear us out, we'd sleep.

---

Spending too much time

obsessing on the past? Don't

think twice, it's alright.

I know how you feel. Only I

trkingmomoe — Sun, 23 Mar 2014 21:49:42 +0000

In reply to I think about this All the

I know how you feel. Only I don't have the cold to contend with. So I decided I needed to do some spring cleaning to keep me real tired at night. I stay a sleep and don't think much that way.

I think about this All the

Richard Day — Sat, 22 Mar 2014 01:25:21 +0000

In reply to A Warmly Spring-like Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

I think about this

All the time, to my regret

I think about this

Loves lost and loves won

I won one love and I lost

But time tells us all

Nothing really lasts

Nothing is this permanent

So I must adjust

hahahahahahaha

I have memories

Memories that just keep on

And still are keepin

the end

I am now supposedly witnessing the first 48 hours of spring and there is a terrible storm out there. hahahaha

Even down, 200 miles into the Cities, it is not that nice. haahaha

I just trudged threw the new four inches of snow in my new shoes; and yet I know that 30 degrees is better than 30 degrees below. hahahahah

I was going to shoot myself, but then I recalled that I had no gun. hahaha