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An impossible dance

MrSmith1 — Mon, 28 Apr 2014 03:01:56 +0000

In reply to She walked on her

An impossible dance ...

prance about on tippy-toes ...

Ballet just a ruse?

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Using auto-tune

mixed with a hip-hop cadence?

It will curl your toes.

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She walked on her

moat — Mon, 28 Apr 2014 01:39:00 +0000

In reply to All great, moat! I take a

She walked on her toes.

Cadence to an odd new song;

Impossible dance.

All great, moat! I take a

MrSmith1 — Mon, 28 Apr 2014 00:28:02 +0000

In reply to I work tomorrow. Stealing

All great, moat!

I take a moment
to mourn the passage of time.
I work tomorrow.

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Running from something
o'er which I have no control
keeps me on my toes.

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I work tomorrow. Stealing

moat — Mon, 28 Apr 2014 00:15:56 +0000

In reply to Another Friendly Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon.

I work tomorrow.

Stealing time from a question;

Running from something.

The lesson again: As if this

moat — Sun, 27 Apr 2014 23:56:48 +0000

In reply to Another Friendly Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon.

The lesson again:

As if this strange thing was learned

by repetition.

The hard things are soft.

Some things outside heard sharply:

A quiet appeal.

The self as a thing.

We don't know about that life.

We talk about it.

Congratulations, Mr. Smith!

Ramona — Sat, 26 Apr 2014 17:44:11 +0000

In reply to Another Friendly Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon.

Congratulations, Mr. Smith! Fingers crossed. I love all your haikus. I don't know how you could choose only one to submit. Great job again this week.

This one should be a poster:

Grand-dad used to say,
"If you live, your time will come",
Grandma's never did.