dagblog - Comments for "A Joyful Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Excellent, moat!

MrSmith1 — Mon, 05 May 2014 02:48:27 +0000

Excellent, moat!

Reluctant Winter

took its time to arrive, but

now delays Spring blooms.

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The shape of her feet

were somewhat unusual;

pointing East and West.

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moat — Mon, 05 May 2014 01:39:12 +0000

The shape of her feet

seen from every angle.

I am not done yet.

Reluctant winter

hides behind spring's festival.

Bird song shadow box.

MrSmith1 — Sun, 04 May 2014 21:43:28 +0000

Wonderful. LOL

The sign was quite clear:

"Don't Park Horses Here" So I

tethered my Buick.

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wabby — Sun, 04 May 2014 16:07:20 +0000

Down a country road,
he let his horse lead him home
and his mind wander.

This is just down the road from where I live. And I don't. Park my horse there, I mean. Actually, I don't have a horse to park.

MrSmith1 — Sun, 04 May 2014 09:30:08 +0000

Here's a couple that I forgot to include in this week's heap of haikus:

In a quiet place
which no-one else could enter,
he wrestled with doubt.

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Loose litter swirling
through the canyons of midtown;
Urban tumbleweeds.