dagblog - Comments for "A Lazy, Hazy and Crazy Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Gianni's sister,

MrSmith1 — Sat, 13 Sep 2014 08:50:18 +0000

Gianni's sister,

the prima Donatelli ...

Chicken Versace

(Sorry, it's 4 AM, and that's the best I could come up with. )

barefooted — Sat, 13 Sep 2014 03:59:55 +0000

On her tippie-toes

the ballerina surprised

the prima donna.

And in so doing,

caused the soprano to sound

much like a chicken!

MrSmith1 — Sat, 13 Sep 2014 02:24:55 +0000

Ha! Good one, barefooted!

Disguising the swans

as prima ballerinas

takes stepping on toes.

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Clouds that masquerade

as ducklings? What can I say

but ... I'm down with that.

barefooted — Sat, 13 Sep 2014 01:02:25 +0000

With down like ducklings

pillowed clouds floated softly,

disguising the swans.