dagblog - Comments for "A World-Weary Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

LOL...

trkingmomoe — Sat, 27 Sep 2014 05:07:09 +0000

In reply to Thanks for the kind words,

LOL...

Thanks for the kind words,

MrSmith1 — Wed, 24 Sep 2014 02:29:01 +0000

In reply to As wonderful as always.

Thanks for the kind words, trkingmomoe!

Have you built a quilt?

You must be a sew and sew,

thimbled fingers tilt..

As wonderful as always.

trkingmomoe — Tue, 23 Sep 2014 07:03:41 +0000

In reply to A World-Weary Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

As wonderful as always. Thanks for this.

I dream of pantries,

MrSmith1 — Sun, 21 Sep 2014 14:31:12 +0000

In reply to I always dream about panties

I dream of pantries,

You mean parties? ... No, I mean ...

Pasties? ...NO!! Panties!

Panties, if scanty enough,

provide their own.counseling.

(With my blurry eyesight this morning, I really did, at first, read panties as pantries... and that's how comedy is born. Hahahaha)

I always dream about panties

Richard Day — Sun, 21 Sep 2014 04:35:20 +0000

In reply to His trousers were gone ...

I always dream about panties

Richard Day — Sun, 21 Sep 2014 04:34:56 +0000

In reply to His trousers were gone ...

I always dream about panties?

Does that mean I need counseling?

His trousers were gone ...

MrSmith1 — Sun, 21 Sep 2014 04:23:51 +0000

In reply to Whoa; that there is a pretty

His trousers were gone ...
her dress hung on a flagpole ...
That was some party.

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Stripped like paint from wood,
or shopping malls in Cleveland.
This is not a dream.

Whoa; that there is a pretty

moat — Sat, 20 Sep 2014 22:46:54 +0000

In reply to Ha! Good one, moat!

Whoa; that there is a pretty tricky tanka haiku: I like it.

My trousers are gone.

Stripped away like paint from wood.

This is a dream: No?

Ha! Good one, moat!

MrSmith1 — Sat, 20 Sep 2014 22:23:51 +0000

In reply to Long dress rehearsal;

Ha! Good one, moat!

The curtain rises,

I'm naked and reciting

some soliloquies ...

"To be or ... maybe not" ... Line!

"Whether 'tis nobler to ..." Line!

Long dress rehearsal;

moat — Sat, 20 Sep 2014 21:41:51 +0000

In reply to A World-Weary Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Long dress rehearsal;

not sure that I fit the role;

The curtain rises.