dagblog - Comments for "A Ludicrously Lovely Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Stone steps up and down,

moat — Fri, 27 Jul 2018 02:16:36 +0000

In reply to He's still sharing the place

Stone steps up and down.
Riverside Park at all times
confuses locals.

That strange land across the way
Is called New Jersey by some.

He's still sharing the place

barefooted — Fri, 27 Jul 2018 01:41:32 +0000

In reply to Sometimes I find myself on

He's still sharing the place because he's still a part of it.

The Upper West Side,

known by some as Manhattan,

Confuses locals.

Sometimes I find myself on

moat — Fri, 27 Jul 2018 01:18:34 +0000

In reply to Can we just admit,

Sometimes I find myself on the Upper West Side of Manhattan. I can report that his report remains breaking news. He is still sharing the place.

Can we just admit,

barefooted — Thu, 26 Jul 2018 01:21:14 +0000

In reply to A Ludicrously Lovely Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Can we just admit,

as anxious, hurting people,

that we miss our muse?

We so need our mister smith ...

to make the nonsense make sense.

This popped up in the "Hits" and made me hurt. I so miss him. I wrote the above silly haiku to both bring a tad of notice back to his genius and to simply smile at him.

I do not wish to sound trite,

Richard Day — Tue, 14 Oct 2014 01:28:13 +0000

In reply to A Ludicrously Lovely Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

I do not wish to sound trite, although that is my forte! ha

I love you see you get 3000 hits like this.

It makes me feeeeeel so damn good. hahahahah

The stories you have just elate me.

May you always receive three thousand hits.

damn!

Good job.

the end

MrSmith1 — Wed, 08 Oct 2014 18:03:40 +0000

In reply to Plot, hatched by a Loon

Nice one, moat. (Although I admit, I had to look up Cormorant ... )

A murder of crows,
An exultation of larks,
a leap of leopards ...

Even gaggles of geese must
admit James Lipton's clever.

Plot, hatched by a Loon

moat — Wed, 08 Oct 2014 00:11:00 +0000

In reply to Excellent, moat!!

Plot, hatched by a Loon

introduces the Falcon:

A Murder of Crows.

Cormorant finds it fishy;

A scene on the beach occurs.

Book mark this and you can

trkingmomoe — Sun, 05 Oct 2014 03:13:56 +0000

In reply to This is remarkable!

Book mark this and you can follow the weather nationally. It is really interesting. You can see snow in Canada right now.

http://cci-reanalyzer.org/About/

You can use your mouse pad to enlarge this and move the world around.

http://earth.nullschool.net/

Excellent, moat!!

MrSmith1 — Sun, 05 Oct 2014 02:07:25 +0000

In reply to Delicate green stem,

Excellent, moat!!

Grasp a sparrow's tale?

Sure, If there's a plot and some

decent characters ..

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Delicate green stems

swaying in the evening breeze

flaunt sleeping flowers.

Delicate green stem,

moat — Sun, 05 Oct 2014 00:37:45 +0000

In reply to A Ludicrously Lovely Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Delicate green stem,

bearing broad leaves in the rain,

dips and turns with ease.

Grasp sparrow's tail:

If I could really do it,

would I have the bird?