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HA!! Good one, Oxy!

MrSmith1 — Sun, 16 Nov 2014 17:24:11 +0000

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HA!! Good one, Oxy!

Seasons may change, but
Winter coats are like old friends,
they both keep us warm.

Oxy Mora — Sun, 16 Nov 2014 16:24:06 +0000

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He's waited all year.

Winter coats are like old friends.

Now the ear muffs, eh.

Thanks trkingmomoe. I

MrSmith1 — Sun, 16 Nov 2014 06:15:40 +0000

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Thanks trkingmomoe. I finally got to wear my winter coat this week.

I hope you are staying warm.

trkingmomoe — Sun, 16 Nov 2014 05:59:21 +0000

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I hope you are staying warm. Enjoyed your play.

Thanks Oxy. Excellent haiku

MrSmith1 — Sat, 15 Nov 2014 04:16:04 +0000

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Thanks Oxy. Excellent haiku.

Laying off doormen
will just lead to some more men,
who, frankly, adore men.

Great play, very true to the

Oxy Mora — Sat, 15 Nov 2014 01:53:58 +0000

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Great play, very true to the time frame. I like the "unmasked" interlude, it remains unanswered as subtext while the last part of the play picks up speed and rushes to a perfect ending. Nice work.

A doorman locked out

is the ultimate snobby

cold layoff notice.