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BTW I also liked the

Oxy Mora — Sat, 13 Dec 2014 18:17:51 +0000

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BTW I also liked the "downtown cafe" haiku. Got an instant mental picture.

Wonderful, DD!!

MrSmith1 — Sat, 13 Dec 2014 17:18:55 +0000

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Wonderful, DD!!

Blessings of the storm;
the world has been forgiven.
for a moment ... Peace.

Thanks Oxy. I remember I

MrSmith1 — Sat, 13 Dec 2014 16:22:47 +0000

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Thanks Oxy. I remember I struggled for a long time when writing that piece. I think I would write it differently now, and even though some people didn't get it when I did it, I still like it.

The bottom line is;
to put things in context, you
need to know content.

You can't be content,
when content lacks a context,
and vice-a versa.

AMAZING!

Richard Day — Sat, 13 Dec 2014 02:30:56 +0000

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AMAZING!

The hoar frost is here

Besides the fog and sticky snow

Everything white

The bushes dance with white

In the wind, bushes dance white

Everything white

This white seems so clean

All the dirt is covered up

But danger is there

Fall down and You're done

Yet the snow helps us

Snow is so less slippery

Yet the white is like

Baptism and forgiveness

A new world begins

the end

Great work, Smith. Love the

Oxy Mora — Sat, 13 Dec 2014 00:42:02 +0000

In reply to A Torturously Turbulent Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Great work, Smith. Love the Dudley lesson. Unforgettable.

Here's a small contribution.

Context's not content.

These words right here are content.

The haiku---context.

When content is writ,

As the here and now of it.

Context is content.