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A heartless poet

MrSmith1 — Sun, 25 Jan 2015 06:20:41 +0000

In reply to Ah, yes. Yes.

A heartless poet

won't recognize his dream till

she provides a beat.

Ah, yes. Yes.

Oxy Mora — Sun, 25 Jan 2015 05:24:38 +0000

In reply to A heartless poetdoesn't

Ah, yes. Yes.

A heartless poetdoesn't

barefooted — Sun, 25 Jan 2015 01:25:23 +0000

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A heartless poet

doesn't recognize his dream

when she dances in.

Good one!

MrSmith1 — Sun, 25 Jan 2015 01:23:39 +0000

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Good one!

A heartless poet

Oxy Mora — Sun, 25 Jan 2015 00:20:30 +0000

In reply to Nice poem, barefoot ... err

A heartless poet

Has no rhythm at all when

A dream girl walks in.

Nice poem, barefoot ... err

MrSmith1 — Sat, 24 Jan 2015 23:59:26 +0000

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Nice poem, barefoot ... err Oxy!

A heartless poet

needs to have a strong liver

to feel his way through.

Ramona, I love all your

Oxy Mora — Sat, 24 Jan 2015 21:19:47 +0000

In reply to Mad at myself about the mixup

Ramona, I love all your comments.

Thanks, barefooted.

Oxy Mora — Sat, 24 Jan 2015 21:17:18 +0000

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Thanks, barefooted. Appreciate the comments.

Mad at myself about the mixup

Ramona — Sat, 24 Jan 2015 20:54:55 +0000

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Mad at myself about the mixup, but I love this comment, too. So there.

This is really, really good,

barefooted — Sat, 24 Jan 2015 20:07:18 +0000

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This is really, really good, Oxy. Makes me wish I had written it.

I don't think he's a "heartless poet", though. Timing really is everything. You've captured that sentiment beautifully ... both in the writer's creative, all-consuming quest, and his lover's plea. Both require singular attention and cannot coexist. Well done!