dagblog - Comments for "A Frosty, Frigid Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Mr. Smith w Karen

PeraclesPlease — Sat, 04 Jul 2020 22:51:00 +0000

In reply to A Frosty, Frigid Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Mr. Smith w Karen

That's truly beautiful, Oxy.

barefooted — Tue, 10 Feb 2015 20:40:09 +0000

In reply to barefooted poems

That's truly beautiful, Oxy. Thank you ...

barefooted poems

Oxy Mora — Tue, 10 Feb 2015 18:29:35 +0000

In reply to She tried to find him

barefooted poems

the words soothe, like sand castles

on sunny beaches.

waves in ascending ripples

and evenings of wine and song

Excellent, LULU and Mr. Smith

Oxy Mora — Tue, 10 Feb 2015 17:59:38 +0000

In reply to Good one, LULU (not verified)

Excellent, LULU and Mr. Smith

Oooooo, nice one!

MrSmith1 — Tue, 10 Feb 2015 16:57:02 +0000

In reply to She tried to find him

Oooooo, nice one!

She tried to find him

barefooted — Tue, 10 Feb 2015 06:10:55 +0000

In reply to Love has passed them by.

She tried to find him,

searching just to catch a glimpse

of who he once was.

But she was changing,

the memories were fading,

she had let him go.

Good one, LULU (not verified)

MrSmith1 — Tue, 10 Feb 2015 05:42:32 +0000

In reply to Love has passed through them

Good one, LULU (not verified) :-)

When Love passes through,
it does not leave a lot, just
a kiss and farewell.

Nice one, Oxy!

MrSmith1 — Tue, 10 Feb 2015 05:38:29 +0000

In reply to Love has passed them by.

Nice one, Oxy!

Love has passed through them

LULU — Tue, 10 Feb 2015 05:24:43 +0000

In reply to Love has passed them by.

Love has passed through them

Once was their lot, no regrets

Choir's echo is sweet

Love has passed them by.

Oxy Mora — Tue, 10 Feb 2015 05:07:42 +0000

In reply to Excellent haiku quartet,

Love has passed them by.

No second takes, no reprieves,

No choir is singing.