dagblog - Comments for "A Surrealistic Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

HA!! Good one, moat!!

MrSmith1 — Tue, 05 May 2015 02:42:00 +0000

In reply to The words themselves bind

HA!! Good one, moat!!

Though words may bind you
Writing makes you regular;
Do it ev'ry day..

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See, you make me laugh all

Richard Day — Tue, 05 May 2015 00:23:25 +0000

In reply to I see you've used the Old

See, you make me laugh all the time. hahahhahahah

Let us all recall literary roots. hahahaha

The words themselves bind

moat — Tue, 05 May 2015 00:11:09 +0000

In reply to Nice, moat!

The words themselves bind
like acorns, nuts, and buds.
Door is mostly shut.

Nice, moat!

MrSmith1 — Mon, 04 May 2015 23:09:16 +0000

In reply to here, there is a chain

Nice, moat!

Sans typography?
typeface iconography;
A chain with no door.

here, there is a chain

moat — Mon, 04 May 2015 23:01:16 +0000

In reply to Two ropes unwinding;one

here, there is a chain
and some say there is a door:
No typography.

Good one, Missy!!

MrSmith1 — Sun, 03 May 2015 22:30:23 +0000

In reply to Two ropes unwinding;one

Good one, Missy!!

tanka haiku:

Two ropes unwinding,
One freeing, one restricting ...
neither without fear.

Tethered lives from day to day;
Freedom, moment to moment.

Two ropes unwinding;one

barefooted — Sun, 03 May 2015 20:16:32 +0000

In reply to Wonderful, moat!!

Two ropes unwinding;

one setting free, the other

tightly constricting.

Which leashes your soul?

Undiscovered fantasy

or the ties that bind?

Wonderful, moat!!

MrSmith1 — Sun, 03 May 2015 19:19:17 +0000

In reply to rope unwinds from post;

Wonderful, moat!!

tanka haiku:

Rope unwinds from post,
tethered dog gets closer to
catching quick red fox.

But the fox discovers the
dog's reach has limitations.

rope unwinds from post;

moat — Sun, 03 May 2015 18:32:30 +0000

In reply to A Surrealistic Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Rope unwinds from post.
Red boat slips into the lake.
Arms rotate blue oars.

Wide arcs of cheerful parting
lash the reluctant water.

Yes, my family has,

MrSmith1 — Sun, 03 May 2015 00:54:31 +0000

In reply to Given the chance, I wonder

Yes, my family has, fortunately, been blessed with great senses of humor. Something my ex-brother-in-law does not have. I think my sister is very funny and can tell hilarious stories drawn from her life ... When we get together, we all laugh a lot. As for my ex-bro ... You're right, i don't know for sure. hahahahaha!