dagblog - Comments for "A Happy, Humid Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon "

MrSmith1 — Mon, 01 Jun 2015 02:01:21 +0000

In reply to Screams must be thoughtless

Nice one!!

Diplomacy means ...
Consideration masks the
rudeness of Instinct.

Screams must be thoughtless

barefooted — Mon, 01 Jun 2015 01:50:43 +0000

In reply to Oooooooo .... Excellent,

Screams must be thoughtless -

consideration masks the

instinct of the soul.

Oooooooo .... Excellent,

MrSmith1 — Mon, 01 Jun 2015 01:20:58 +0000

In reply to Twilight is the realmbetween

Oooooooo .... Excellent, Missy!!

A whispered secret
can not be dislodged or opened
by a thoughtless scream.

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Twilight is the realm
of newborn hopes and wishes
which must feed on dreams.

Twilight is the realmbetween

barefooted — Mon, 01 Jun 2015 00:36:35 +0000

In reply to A Happy, Humid Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Twilight is the realm

between who you once were and

who you've yet to meet.

A whispered secret

that lingers in the fragrance

of your future past.

Nice, moat!!

MrSmith1 — Sun, 31 May 2015 01:16:56 +0000

In reply to Three cuts of the pie

Nice, moat!!

Drawn lines create space ...
it's how we define our world;
establish context.

Three cuts of the pie

moat — Sun, 31 May 2015 00:47:39 +0000

In reply to A Happy, Humid Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Three cuts of the pie
give eight pieces in between:
Drawn lines create space.

Yeah, it's a great song.

MrSmith1 — Sat, 30 May 2015 22:31:09 +0000

In reply to

Yeah, it's a great song. Even 40 years as a TV theme song hasn't diminished it's power.

When one sings sweetly
of agony and mayhem,
Irony prevails.

Richard Day — Sat, 30 May 2015 21:06:49 +0000

In reply to Thanks, DD!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2-BtquTKw78

I knew I could get it. hhahahahaah

I love this song and yet irony prevailed.

hahahahha

Thanks, DD!!

MrSmith1 — Sat, 30 May 2015 20:56:53 +0000

In reply to I get afraid

Thanks, DD!!

You can not be lost
you are, for me, my North Star.
Shining in the sky.

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triple haiku:

Whoever said that
suicide is painless was
a damned optimist.

suicide? painless?
dying hurts and that ain't all;
it hurts our loved ones.

I suppose that sounds
trite. It is. It is also
true as true can be.

I get afraid

Richard Day — Sat, 30 May 2015 20:37:17 +0000

In reply to A Happy, Humid Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

I get afraid

Just beside my self

I am just beside myself

I get so damned lost

Suicide is there

Suicide is just painless

But I am afraid

People I know now

And yet people I knew then

Fight death all these days

I get so damned mad

And I should not get so mad

But I am alive

I am grateful to

Be alive as I

Awaken to a new world

Every new day

(Thank you for being there. Keep up the good fight!)