dagblog - Comments for "A Fadin' Away Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Oh Missy!! This is wonderful

MrSmith1 — Fri, 19 Jun 2015 03:31:05 +0000

In reply to Reach into the dark,feel my

Oh Missy!! This is wonderful!!

Reach into the dark,feel my

barefooted — Fri, 19 Jun 2015 01:55:39 +0000

In reply to A Fadin' Away Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Reach into the dark,

feel my eyelash brush your cheek,

let me comfort you.

Listen for my whispered song ...

it will carry you to me.

Taking a shower

Elusive Trope — Tue, 16 Jun 2015 16:19:19 +0000

In reply to Taking a shower

Taking a shower

he panics his last haiku

syllable count wrong

Taking a shower

MrSmith1 — Tue, 16 Jun 2015 10:47:58 +0000

In reply to Chills run down her spineas

Taking a shower
at the Bates Motel, more than
chills run down her spine.

The stone lions on

Elusive Trope — Tue, 16 Jun 2015 05:03:23 +0000

In reply to The stone lions on

The stone lions on

the grand porch of the grand home

bored with the same view

Knowing he'll be there

Elusive Trope — Tue, 16 Jun 2015 04:58:43 +0000

In reply to Chills run down her spineas

Knowing he'll be there

waiting as he always does

in that chair he made

Chills run down her spineas

barefooted — Tue, 16 Jun 2015 04:44:38 +0000

In reply to You got it! Excellent!!

Chills run down her spine

as she ponders the walk home,

knowing he'll be there.

The stone lions on

MrSmith1 — Tue, 16 Jun 2015 04:05:11 +0000

In reply to Library book on

The stone lions on
Forty-second and Fifth Ave.
guard chapter and verse.

You got it! Excellent!!

MrSmith1 — Tue, 16 Jun 2015 03:58:24 +0000

In reply to Okay. Got it.

You got it! Excellent!!

Having said his piece,
he waits for her reply, and
ponders the walk home.

Library book on

Elusive Trope — Tue, 16 Jun 2015 02:37:51 +0000

In reply to I've been avoiding

Library book on

Forty-second and Fifth Ave

Flutters in the wind