dagblog - Comments for "A Rainbow-Filled Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Good, moat!!

MrSmith1 — Mon, 29 Jun 2015 02:29:40 +0000

In reply to repeating signal,

Good, moat!!

Like a fog horn's drone,
my GPS annoys while
giving directions

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repeating signal,

moat — Mon, 29 Jun 2015 02:17:21 +0000

In reply to A Rainbow-Filled Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

repeating signal,
like a fog horn heard at sea,
tells me where I am.

Circle of bright fire
that cannot be held with hands
looks for knowing eyes.

Nice.

MrSmith1 — Sun, 28 Jun 2015 02:06:50 +0000

In reply to With tiny fingers,

Nice.

With tiny fingers,
reaching for ten tiny toes,
she learned her 'piggies.'

Nice, Trope!

MrSmith1 — Sun, 28 Jun 2015 01:57:16 +0000

In reply to the memories slide

Nice, Trope!

HA! You would pick that line

MrSmith1 — Sun, 28 Jun 2015 01:55:58 +0000

In reply to Our id's bids for kidslike

HA! You would pick that line ... LOL Well done, Missy!

Stored in the garage,
like the sleds on which we slid,
broken toys we hid.

the memories slide

Elusive Trope — Sun, 28 Jun 2015 00:57:05 +0000

In reply to Our id's bids for kidslike

the memories slide

like the sleds on which we slid

faster and faster

With tiny fingers,

Elusive Trope — Sun, 28 Jun 2015 00:53:47 +0000

In reply to With tiny fingers,long lost

With tiny fingers,

the young child touches the bark

of the ancient tree

Our id's bids for kidslike

barefooted — Sat, 27 Jun 2015 22:13:26 +0000

In reply to Good one, Missy!

Our id's bids for kids

like the sleds on which we slid

tend to flip our lids.

Good one, Missy!

MrSmith1 — Sat, 27 Jun 2015 21:47:31 +0000

In reply to With tiny fingers,long lost

Good one, Missy!

Procreation blues:
Long lost memories scratching
our id's bids for kids.

With tiny fingers,long lost

barefooted — Sat, 27 Jun 2015 21:35:10 +0000

In reply to With tiny fingers,

With tiny fingers,

long lost memories scratching

our itch to forget.