dagblog - Comments for "Another Laborious Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Nice, Missy!

MrSmith1 — Thu, 10 Sep 2015 02:54:43 +0000

In reply to I gave you my heart ...even

Nice, Missy!

I gave you my heart
and now my blood is pooling.
Form follows function.

Good one, moat!

MrSmith1 — Thu, 10 Sep 2015 02:47:35 +0000

In reply to I gave you my heart,

Good one, moat!

I gave you my heart.
Tuck it in your shirtwaist and
gaze at it often.

I gave you my heart ...even

barefooted — Thu, 10 Sep 2015 01:40:54 +0000

In reply to I gave you my heart,

I gave you my heart ...

even though its sweetness died

a watery death.

I gave you my heart,

moat — Thu, 10 Sep 2015 01:09:08 +0000

In reply to suicidal watermelon....

I gave you my heart.
You only wanted my seeds;
Flash of waxy rind.

suicidal watermelon....

wabby — Wed, 09 Sep 2015 17:20:36 +0000

In reply to Another Laborious Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

suicidal watermelon....

This kept popping up on my newsfeed over the weekend.

hmmm

Wow. Wonderful.

MrSmith1 — Mon, 07 Sep 2015 03:24:49 +0000

In reply to She was just a childwhen an

Wow. Wonderful.

She was just a childwhen an

barefooted — Mon, 07 Sep 2015 02:51:02 +0000

In reply to Another Laborious Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

She was just a child

when an angry world destroyed

her innocent glow.

Cynical and hard,

she fought back against questions

that would plague her dreams.

As the years collapsed

into desperate struggles,

life began to change.

Quietly, she learned.

With steadfast resolve, she grew.

She was worth the time.

GRAMPA

Richard Day — Sat, 05 Sep 2015 23:55:04 +0000

In reply to Another Laborious Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

GRAMPA

They are so so pure

They smell so so very nice

They are without sin

There is purity

This new babe will be middle

A fetus decides

hahahahahah

Surrounded by girls

This time it might be a boy

Daddy loves his girls

It might be a boy

Mommy feels a 'difference'.

A boy lies within

No sonogram yet

But Daddy loves his babies

And yet I shall pray

Watching families

Develop before my eyes

I feel there is hope

Watching these children

Develop with parents who care

Gives me so much hope

I CAN DO IT HERE. HAHAHAH

Richard Day — Sat, 05 Sep 2015 22:55:00 +0000

In reply to Well, if he's a he he'll have

I CAN DO IT HERE. HAHAHAH

SEE IT WORKS1

Well, if he's a he he'll have

barefooted — Sat, 05 Sep 2015 22:45:48 +0000

In reply to These are goooooood people

Well, if he's a he he'll have to endure having two big sisters ... not always easy! And if she's a she she'll have to endure hand-me-downs ... never fun! But whether a he or a she there'll be lots of love to help along the way, including Grandpa's.