dagblog - Comments for "A Rain Spattered Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

MrSmith1 — Thu, 08 Oct 2015 11:25:48 +0000

In reply to Sometimes it's over.Sometimes

Hmmm ... Okay, who are you and what have you done to Missy?

An interesting, if somewhat disturbing haiku to read so early in the morning.
I'll try to comment more later in the day.

Sometimes it's over.Sometimes

barefooted — Thu, 08 Oct 2015 05:17:00 +0000

In reply to A Rain Spattered Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Sometimes it's over.

Sometimes it doesn't implore

an explanation.

Because it's limping.

Because it needs to be shot

to bleed an answer.

Oh, very good, Missy!!

MrSmith1 — Wed, 07 Oct 2015 10:15:30 +0000

In reply to Shattered, broken bonesdance

Oh, very good, Missy!!

(Don't have time to write a response right now. I'll write one later.)

Shattered, broken bonesdance

barefooted — Wed, 07 Oct 2015 05:28:07 +0000

In reply to A Rain Spattered Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Shattered, broken bones

dance between the memories

of pain and pageant,

all the while feeling

the necessity to live,

even as they die.

Thanks.

trkingmomoe — Sat, 03 Oct 2015 10:59:44 +0000

In reply to A pigeon? No, it's just the

Thanks.

Please stay dry.

Here is another song I love.

A pigeon? No, it's just the

MrSmith1 — Sat, 03 Oct 2015 10:51:20 +0000

In reply to I love that picture of your

A pigeon? No, it's just the way she's folded her hands in front of her. :-)

I love that picture of your

trkingmomoe — Sat, 03 Oct 2015 10:40:10 +0000

In reply to A Rain Spattered Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

I love that picture of your mother. It that a pigon on her lap.

1961 Raindrops.