dagblog - Comments for "A Quiet, Rainy Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Your dissipation;

MrSmith1 — Tue, 17 May 2016 04:12:19 +0000

In reply to Round about midnight

Your dissipation;
dismal and disappointing,
distant and dismissed.

Round about midnight

PeraclesPlease — Tue, 17 May 2016 03:59:59 +0000

In reply to (Sigh) Peracles, what can I

Round about midnight

My structure has dissipat

ed, only headstones.

(Sigh) Peracles, what can I

MrSmith1 — Mon, 16 May 2016 23:33:55 +0000

In reply to No rhyme or reason,

(Sigh) Peracles, what can I say? You have a clever mind. Focus on structure.

Look, I'm not teasin'

your "kus" have got me sneezin'

it's "AH-CHU" season.

Confucius say,

PeraclesPlease — Mon, 16 May 2016 22:04:59 +0000

In reply to For these are the rhymes

Confucius say,

don't need a weatherman to

knows which way nose blose.

Dylan sang nasal

ly, the proboscis of a

starved generation.

Soupçon is a hint,

PeraclesPlease — Mon, 16 May 2016 21:45:55 +0000

In reply to For these are the rhymes

Soupçon is a hint,

Soupspoon is adequate, while

Souperbe's overwrought.

No rhyme or reason,

PeraclesPlease — Mon, 16 May 2016 21:38:25 +0000

In reply to For these are the rhymes

No rhyme or reason,

No time or season, just sub-

lime sport that's pleasin'.

For these are the rhymes

MrSmith1 — Mon, 16 May 2016 21:01:18 +0000

In reply to Saw the best rhymes of

For these are the rhymes

That try men's soup . And the rhymes.

They are a changling.

Saw the best rhymes of

PeraclesPlease — Mon, 16 May 2016 17:38:33 +0000

In reply to Levitation hide?

Saw the best rhymes of

my generation mangled,

Droid autocorrect

Levitation hide?

MrSmith1 — Mon, 16 May 2016 17:22:13 +0000

In reply to Leviathan - if

Levitation hide?

He just swallowed Jonah and

now he's digesting

Leviathan - if

PeraclesPlease — Mon, 16 May 2016 14:50:52 +0000

In reply to God's biggest regrets;

Leviathan - if

such a bad motherfucker,

why's he hiding out?