http://dagblog.com/arts/singin-blues-friday-afternoon-haikulodeon-21205 Comments for "Singin' the Blues on a Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon" en http://dagblog.com/comment/229341#comment-229341 <a id="comment-229341"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/229300#comment-229300">Lovely, Missy!!   But did you</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>Well, it's not like I linked to Wiki!  <img alt="wink" height="23" src="http://cdn.ckeditor.com/4.5.6/full-all/plugins/smiley/images/wink_smile.png" title="wink" width="23" /></p> </div></div></div> Fri, 14 Oct 2016 23:45:18 +0000 barefooted comment 229341 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/229300#comment-229300 <a id="comment-229300"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/229285#comment-229285">Lying on the sand,</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>Lovely, Missy!!   But did you really think I didn't know who Jonathan Livingston Seagull was?  LOL<br /> Thank you for thinking I was too young to get the reference.  (Or wait, did you think I was too senile to remember?) Anyway, thanks for this lovely haiku + tanka haiku.   I was going to do a response, but my first impulse was to make a crass joke about the Republican nominee and rather than make such a vulgarity at nearly 3 AM, I think I will just let your work stand on its own.  Nicely done.</p> <p> </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Fri, 14 Oct 2016 06:51:07 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 229300 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/229285#comment-229285 <a id="comment-229285"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/arts/singin-blues-friday-afternoon-haikulodeon-21205">Singin&#039; the Blues on a Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>Lying on the sand,</p> <p>drops of sweat between her breasts;</p> <p>reddened and sunburnt.</p> <p> </p> <p>Waves crashing on shore,</p> <p>while <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8COt1n3jDqA">Jonathan Livingston</a></p> <p>dances overhead ...</p> <p>  Searching for the acceptance</p> <p>  she has all but abandoned.</p> <p> </p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Fri, 14 Oct 2016 00:48:57 +0000 barefooted comment 229285 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/229121#comment-229121 <a id="comment-229121"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/229119#comment-229119">Away, foul cobwebs!</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>Hahahahaha!! Wonderful, Missy!!</p> <p>Interviewing me?<br /> "Never quote my spoken word."<br /> said the Senator.</p> <p> </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sun, 09 Oct 2016 05:06:53 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 229121 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/229119#comment-229119 <a id="comment-229119"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/229118#comment-229118">Ha!! Good one, Missy!!</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>Away, foul cobwebs!</p> <p>Never cross my path again!</p> <p>(Said the fated fly)</p> <p> </p> <p>Away, haunting past!</p> <p>Never quote my spoken word!</p> <p>(Said the fated man) </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sun, 09 Oct 2016 02:14:39 +0000 barefooted comment 229119 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/229118#comment-229118 <a id="comment-229118"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/229111#comment-229111">They kept their promise</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>Ha!! Good one, Missy!!</p> <p>Fact: Kids destroy things<br /> In a haunted house, they'll kick<br /> away the cobwebs.  </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sun, 09 Oct 2016 01:28:22 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 229118 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/229111#comment-229111 <a id="comment-229111"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/229108#comment-229108">Excellent, moat!!</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>They kept their promise</p> <p>just as they kept their lifetimes ...</p> <p>neat as a parlor.</p> <p>  Until the grandkids showed up</p> <p>  and kicked away the cobwebs.</p> <p> </p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sun, 09 Oct 2016 00:27:07 +0000 barefooted comment 229111 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/229108#comment-229108 <a id="comment-229108"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/comment/229106#comment-229106">Keeping the word good</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>Excellent, moat!!</p> <p>My grandpa did not<br /> like keeping the parlor neat ...<br /> which drove grandma nuts.</p> <p>Not without effort, per se,<br /> they kept their relationship.</p> <p> </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sun, 09 Oct 2016 00:13:01 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 229108 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/229106#comment-229106 <a id="comment-229106"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/arts/singin-blues-friday-afternoon-haikulodeon-21205">Singin&#039; the Blues on a Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p>Keeping the word good<br /> like keeping the parlor neat<br /> Is a full time job.</p> <p>Not as an effort per se,<br /> more like a relationship.</p> </div></div></div> Sat, 08 Oct 2016 23:52:23 +0000 moat comment 229106 at http://dagblog.com http://dagblog.com/comment/229083#comment-229083 <a id="comment-229083"></a> <p><em>In reply to <a href="http://dagblog.com/arts/singin-blues-friday-afternoon-haikulodeon-21205">Singin&#039; the Blues on a Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon</a></em></p> <div class="field field-name-comment-body field-type-text-long field-label-hidden"><div class="field-items"><div class="field-item even"><p><span style="font-size:12px">Forgot to include this one: <br /><br /> Got the pastel blues,</span><br /><span style="font-size:12px">no spectacular failure,<br /> just a shade away.</span></p> <p> </p> <p> </p> </div></div></div> Sat, 08 Oct 2016 14:33:26 +0000 MrSmith1 comment 229083 at http://dagblog.com