dagblog - Comments for "A Decently December Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon"

Like two wheelbarrows ...

barefooted — Sat, 17 Dec 2016 19:50:20 +0000

In reply to We pass each other,

Like two wheelbarrows ...

each created to lessen

the burden of love.

We pass each other,

moat — Sat, 17 Dec 2016 01:59:03 +0000

In reply to A Decently December Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

We pass each other
bearing incredible loads
like two wheelbarrows.

The old salt tells us:

moat — Thu, 15 Dec 2016 01:51:21 +0000

In reply to A captain of an old ship.

The sea salt tells us:
Keep rowing your boat forward.
Be like me, old fools.

A captain of an old ship.

Richard Day — Wed, 14 Dec 2016 21:28:03 +0000

In reply to Something is mixed up.

A captain of an old ship.

That is all I got Moat.

The captain of the old ship has sailed away.

Goodbye, Mr. Smith.

barefooted — Sun, 11 Dec 2016 21:07:29 +0000

In reply to A Decently December Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

Goodbye, Mr. Smith.

I will remember your words;

pieces of beauty

given as shreds of your heart

cutting through a senseless world.

More like a castle

PeraclesPlease — Fri, 09 Dec 2016 09:47:53 +0000

In reply to The gate is ajar.

More like a castle

whose drawbridge across the moat's

raised for the last time.

The gate is ajar.

moat — Fri, 09 Dec 2016 02:01:03 +0000

In reply to A Decently December Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

The gate is ajar.
The garden left unwatered.
Leaves form drifts like snow.

Short-Circuit

PeraclesPlease — Wed, 07 Dec 2016 17:41:13 +0000

In reply to And so it does end

Short-Circuit

How can this humor
overcome such pain - haiku
short-circuit despair?

Anonymous poet
playing for keeps while we were
just having some fun

Who reads poetry
these days? an anachronism
come to life, or death...

Gallows humor, man!
our Penelope weaving
and unweaving verse

Putting off his end
with charm, and grace and knowing,
(and damn prolific).

I never met you,
dear Mr. Smith, but God speed -
do write when you can.

- xxo, PP

And so it does end

tmccarthy0 — Wed, 07 Dec 2016 04:26:18 +0000

In reply to A Decently December Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

And so it does end

A last Haiku for a friend

Hearts broken again.

Good to see you back online,

MrSmith1 — Sun, 04 Dec 2016 00:11:41 +0000

In reply to Hi Mr. Smith.

Good to see you back online, DD!!