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Three times. With admiration.

Flavius — Tue, 25 Dec 2018 06:08:23 +0000

Three times. With admiration.

Merry Christmas!

Hmm. I think I get it. My

Doctor Cleveland — Sat, 22 Dec 2018 04:05:43 +0000

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Hmm. I think I get it. My blog voice started to mix with the voice of the story's narrator? I can certainly see how that would happen.

Thanks for the extra reads!

I reread it ,combining that

Flavius — Fri, 21 Dec 2018 05:15:30 +0000

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I reread it ,combining that with a first reading of "Writing short fiction then and now" .

Consequently the two combined in way that affected something . I won't reach to try over- explaining that except that in a backwards way it reminded me of " A poem should not mean, but be" .But to refute it.

The craftsman of "Writing short fiction...." casually insinuated himself as an ink- stained -wretch (sorry) in today's reading matter-of-factly normalizing the fantastic events.

It certainly worked for me.

And thanks, mm. Never bad

Doctor Cleveland — Thu, 20 Dec 2018 16:09:53 +0000

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And thanks, mm. Never bad being compared to Vonnegut.

Thanks. I’m glad you enjoyed

Doctor Cleveland — Thu, 20 Dec 2018 16:05:34 +0000

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Thanks. I’m glad you enjoyed that.

Thanks, G. You’re too kind.

Doctor Cleveland — Thu, 20 Dec 2018 16:03:34 +0000

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Thanks, G. You’re too kind.

I thought that was such a

Michael Maiello — Thu, 20 Dec 2018 14:22:54 +0000

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I thought that was such a brilliant, Vonnegutty touch.

Thanks.

Flavius — Thu, 20 Dec 2018 04:30:51 +0000

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Thanks.

I liked the sixth floor limit.

Incredible story, doc. You

Michael Wolraich — Thu, 20 Dec 2018 03:02:38 +0000

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Incredible story, doc. You mentioned in your last post that you're a better Shakespeare scholar than you are a fiction writer. All I can say is that you must be one hell of a scholar.