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We search for meaning, But as

MrSmith1 — Fri, 03 Dec 2010 23:30:19 +0000

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We search for meaning, But as we wander through Life, Fog envelops us.

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Though his hand was out, His eyes told me his spirit, Craved kindness, not cash.

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As the years went by, I could not forget her eyes, So filled with kindness.

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She has a smile, That can send him to the moon, So ... he makes her laugh.

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Cherries are cheery, Limes sublime, (eat with aplomb.), Produce profiling.

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Paisleys, polka dots, Stripes, plaids (and argyle socks), A fashion mash-up.

haiku: "Though his tea was

MrSmith1 — Fri, 03 Dec 2010 13:02:20 +0000

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haiku: "Though his tea was brisk,
And his manner was quite brusque,
She served him the bisque."

"What is on your mind?,The

LisB — Fri, 03 Dec 2010 04:53:24 +0000

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"What is on your mind?,
The weight of the world ... or the,
Lightness of being?"

"A slice of apple,
A wedge of sharp cheddar cheese,
And you by my side."

I love both of these, for many different reasons.

Ha! "....neither needs

wws — Fri, 03 Dec 2010 04:48:53 +0000

In reply to Wonderful. I sense a theme

Ha! "....neither needs matches...."

You're good, Mr. Smith.

Wonderful. I sense a theme

MrSmith1 — Fri, 03 Dec 2010 02:35:52 +0000

In reply to Love your habit of daily

Wonderful. I sense a theme forming ...

"Scouts going camping,

Lovers caught in passion's throes,

Neither needs matches."

Love your habit of daily

wws — Thu, 02 Dec 2010 19:59:03 +0000

In reply to haikus

Love your habit of daily Haiku, Mr. Smith.

For your dune collection:

Binoculared Boys,

Scouts hiking, chance on tryst

of "hidden" lovers.

A freeze frame moment

for all concerned; is there a

merit badge for this?

I wish I could just insert

tmccarthy0 — Wed, 01 Dec 2010 20:56:02 +0000

In reply to The sand dune one was a

I wish I could just insert laughter, that is a great story.

The sand dune one was a

MrSmith1 — Wed, 01 Dec 2010 20:40:32 +0000

In reply to I love the Sand Dunes one

The sand dune one was a personal memory. It was 1974 and my then girlfriend and I were ... umm, you know, behind a sand dune of a deserted beach on a beautiful Nantucket morning, until a curious dog came upon us ... fortunately, the dog's owner was quite some distance away and we had time to regain our 'composure' before he caught up to his dog and put him back on his leash. Ah youth...

I love the Sand Dunes one

tmccarthy0 — Wed, 01 Dec 2010 20:26:02 +0000

In reply to haikus

I love the Sand Dunes one because it reminds me of the day my husband and I were hiking along the Dungeness Spit, only to run into a friend of ours wife, who was with another man. So that one really made me chuckle for just one minute, even though that day we winced and we all winced hard.

One a day does it?Twenty four

Richard Day — Wed, 01 Dec 2010 20:01:27 +0000

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One a day does it?

Twenty four hours brings a new

Poem from Mr. Smith

Fun stuff!!