MURDER, POLITICS, AND THE END OF THE JAZZ AGE
by Michael Wolraich
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MURDER, POLITICS, AND THE END OF THE JAZZ AGE by Michael Wolraich Order today at Barnes & Noble / Amazon / Books-A-Million / Bookshop |
From slanted windows framed high
in the barn's gable end, I mind a day
the garden patch was strafed, the late
melon patch was ruined, and hickory
switches chastened the granite ledge.
Arctic slices have invaded the Yankee
breakfast of warm apple pie, sending
shivers through the pumpkin allies; the
morning's blueberries have resigned---
ruptured buckshot, jelly spread inside;
rouged sickle pears, like fodder stranded
on topmost limbs, now study the mix of
ominous trends and windward twist
---heaven bound with green bravado---
and the memory of a Summer's kiss;
as a child I once envisioned myself as
a grown man smiling down; now I
spy the orchard warrior leering back
at me in a specter of Fall recruits---he
has culled the dreamers from the resolute;
along the gravel shale paths home,
I track the mountain evening drafts,
scout firewood camps and cannon
atop the dry-stone walls; down-gully
a carbine eye has leveled its sights;
survival is the Autumn primer, the
scent of snow, the art of burrowing
neighbors, the husbandry of cabbage
and potato; how tepid seem the zero
months in a field-stone cellar hole.
In shades of far-range pastel chalk
the clover hay falls in one last cut;
soldier boys smother in grape shot;
a young general....musters his rakes,
trails the men home, to supper call.
Comments
Really wonderful, Oxy! Bravo!
by MrSmith1 on Fri, 02/10/2012 - 1:53pm
Thanks very much, Mr. Smith.
by Oxy Mora on Fri, 02/10/2012 - 2:23pm
Lovin' "green bravado"..
by jollyroger on Sat, 02/11/2012 - 2:54am
Thanks, Jolly.
by Oxy Mora on Sat, 02/11/2012 - 9:58am
I echo the bravados.
And I have indeed tasted of apple pie in the morning.
by Richard Day on Sat, 02/11/2012 - 11:15am
Thanks, Richard. I'm happy to know that you are a true Yankee at heart.
by Oxy Mora on Sat, 02/11/2012 - 1:13pm
That is beautiful Oxy!
by tmccarthy0 on Sat, 02/11/2012 - 11:38am
Appreciate you, Tmac.
by Oxy Mora on Sat, 02/11/2012 - 1:15pm
Good poem.
I particularly like the wheeling back and forward between rolling r's and glottal stops. My favorite is: "In shades of far-range pastel chalk"
by moat on Sun, 02/12/2012 - 2:37pm
Thanks, Moat.
by Oxy Mora on Sun, 02/12/2012 - 2:53pm
Wow. I wish I could write like this. Beautiful, Oxy.
by LisB on Sun, 02/12/2012 - 3:20pm
Thanks, LisaB. A poem like this is a process. By the time I finished it, I threw most of the original away. Billy Collins has an awfully good poem, can't remember the name, about poetry students. You have to beat it about the head and shoulders to turn it into a poem. Then again, it's easy to loose the initial inspiration, so always save copies until you think you have it, then throw them away or you'll revise it forever.
by Oxy Mora on Sun, 02/12/2012 - 3:55pm