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    A Deplorable/Adorable Friday Afternoon at the Haikulodeon

     

     


    Here's this week's heap of haikus:

     

     

     

    When I was little,
    sitting in my parent's car,
    was an adventure.

     

     

     

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    Small traffic island
    pedestrian oasis
    'midst a sea of cars.

     

     

     

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    He recalls fondly
    how one rainy afternoon
    they shared an awning.

     

     

     


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    Thoughts, planted wisely,
    blossom in reluctant minds,
    when the time is right.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     


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    Remember; Thousands
    of things will go RIGHT for you,
    ev'ry single day.

     

     

     

     

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    In Nantucket pubs,
    Zithers and dulcimers play,
    to pleasant drunkards.

     

     

     

     


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    A wren mocked a rose,
    'I can sing a song of love',
    The rose smiled, then bloomed.

     

     

     

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    A wind-swept plateau,
    where the sky looms large, as in
    a John Ford western.

     

     

     

     

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    Walking through meadows,
    I gaze at distant fences,
    and ask ... what's beyond?

     

     

     


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    tanka haiku:

     

    All men were once boys,
    All leaders, once followers,
    Wise folks, ignorant.

    Neither resent nor regret,
    all will soon enough be frail.

     

     

     

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    In a musty barn,
    a rotted wooden basket,
    once held a harvest.

     

     

     

     

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    A hammer pounding,
    driving nails into the wall,
    hanging tranquil art.

     

     

     

     

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    A convent garden ...
    a devout mantis prays for
    Jack-in-the-pulpit.

     

     

     

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    a haiku quartet:

     

    The sidewalk peddler
    earns his living lately in the
    glow of the street lamp.

    He can not go home
    to Rivington Street 'til he
    has sold all his fruit.

    To each passersby
    he offers a plum and smiles
    when they do not buy.

    the glow of the streetlight
    enshrines persistence as he
    continues hoping.

     


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    "Okay, let's begin.
    Insertez-vous tab A?!  Damn!
    The plans are in FRENCH!"

     

     

     

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    We stacked the firewood
    then trudged through the mud to the
    hen-house to get eggs.

     

     

     


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    Observation-ku:

     

     

    Lately, more strangers
    that I meet on the street are
    calling me, "Poppy."


     

     

     

     

     

     

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    An empty vase sits
    on a cluttered office desk
    waiting for flowers.

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    Sadly, it seems while
    June was pinching pennies, John
    was pinching barmaids.

     

     

     

     


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    When you have a lot
    that's on your mind, let your day
    begin quietly.

     
     

     

     

     

     

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    None shall ever know
    private failures we endure ...
    unless we succeed.

     

     

     

     

     

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    Her vichyssoise was
    so cold, the potatoes wore
    jackets to keep warm.

     

     

     

     


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    Red veins on noses,
    and whiskey-filled kittens?!! THESE
    are your fav'rite things?

     

     

     

     


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    rain-soaked city streets,
    the glare of flashing neon
    blinds a private eye.

     

     

     


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     tanka haiku:

     

    A man with a limp
    quietly whistles on his
    way to the bus stop.


        His halting steps belie the
        music he hears in his head.

     
     


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    Sometimes an echo
    from a life you left behind,
    catches up to you.

     

     

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    triple haiku:


     
    I dream, I wish, I
    want, hope and wait ... then give up
    and go back to sleep.
     
    I dream, I wish, I
    want, hope and wait ... then give up
    and go back to sleep.
     
    I dream, I wish, I
    want, hope and wait ... then give up
    and now I can't sleep.

     
     

     


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    The glow of the moon,
    Illuminates the stillness,
    Of country meadows.
     

     

     

     

     
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    There is an old tree
    that knows my heartaches and has
    heard my confessions.

     

     

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    tanka haiku + haiku

     

    Has it all been said?
    Do we just repeat words which
    have lost all meaning?

           Does the subtlety of one's
           inflection change anything?


    Does memory loss
    bless one's creativity?
    Maybe ... I forget.

     

     

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    While more coffee brews,
    whisperings in the kitchen,
    often burns the toast.

     

     

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    What you are drawn to,
    has within it, the lesson
    that you need to learn.

     


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    There are times when no
    words will suffice, we just need
    to look at flowers.


    (Photo courtesy of Kristina Rebelo)

     

     

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    His hopes had been dashed,
    his dreams all surrendered … The
    tide pulls at his feet.

     

     


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    A thimble of gin
    Is all I'm allowed these days,
    my thumb's a drunkard.

     
     

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    I put on my Keds,
    and an old college sweatshirt ...
    It's walking weather!

     

     

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    triple haiku:

     

    I met a rabbit
    in the glen one dewy morn,
    we stared warily,

    but neither of us
    moved a muscle 'til we had
    sized the other up.

    and then I felt an
    aimless breeze, wander past us,
    and we went our ways.

     

     

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    She paused to reflect ...
    She had read this book 6 times ...
    Same ending each time.

     

    Vincent van Gogh (1853–1890) -  L'Arlésienne: Madame Joseph-Michel Ginoux


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    Lonely blue highways,
    asphalt to infinity.
    No rear view mirror.

     


     

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    Coffee and crullers,
    sitting on the dock, watching
    the boats come and go.

     

     

     

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    Sometimes, I think back
    to the heroes of my youth,
    and just enjoy them.

     

     

     

     

    More later.

     

     

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    Bonus poem - (Facebook keeps reminding me of poems I've written that I have forgotten about ... )

     

    A poem for Emily -

    I'm adrift in damp depression
    over moonbeams which don't shine for me
    each darkened night, my porch swing's empty
    and no-one sips my tea but me.


    Gloom is an amber shadow,
    which hides behind each flirting tree
    and yet ... in spite of all misgivings,
    my violets still await the Spring.

     

    And so, I can not help but wonder ...
    and while I'm wondering, I sing.

     

    Now, I know my voice has gotten raspy
    and my memory's lost a thought or two,
    but what I feel has sailed the oceans
    and wrestled dragons (more than a few.).

     

    my feelings scaled enormous mountains,
    and engaged in many a daring fling

     

    Still, I can not help but wonder
    and while I'm wondering, I sing.

     

    Hope, my friend, has perplexed many,
    Emily says it's a feathered thing,
    But whether you've got much or you haven't any,
    my violets still await the Spring.

     

    ( Michael Tracy Smith - c 2012 )

     

     

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    Comments

    Rebuttal is hard,
    best absorbed in the moment.
    Now, it is your truth.

    "Poppy" means respect.
    You are visible right now:
    Received as Given.
     


    Excellent, moat!  Thanks.

     

     

     


    Shine on, Harvest Moon!

    T'would be nice if the folks there

    Looked up now and then.

    (Kevin Ambrose via Washington Post)


    Wonderful, Missy!!
    Those photos are amazing!!
    Blood red harvest moon!!

     

    (I was going to write a haiku, but then I noticed that I already did.  Ha!0

     

    A red moon rises
    in the sky above D.C.
    the Capitol gains.

     

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    A red moon will rise
    o'er a House divided and
    illuminate hope.

     

     


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